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Hello, My name is ;;;.

Let me introduce my hobbies.

I have several hobbies, and I will introduce the two of them.

 

My first hobby is watching TV.

I have been watching TV since I was ten years old.

I watch TV to release my stress.

My favorite TV program is 무한도전.

Because It’s fun and I like the members.

I use the computer to rewatch episodes.

 

My second hobby is listening to music.

Because It is exciting and makes the mind comfortable.*

My favorite music genre is Dubstep.

I have been listening like dubstep for two months.

I use Melon to listen to the song.

 

Thank you for listening.

이제뒤에서 다섯번째문장만 고치면 될거같지 말입니다...

it is exciting and relaxing

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