영어 검수 부탁드림다

My family is father, mother, and older brother.

 

My dream is to be a security programmer.

 

I use internet lecture when I study.

 

My favorite subject is math.

 

And my worst subject is Korean.

 

I am interested in sharp pencil.

 

My favorite music genre is rock.

 

Thank you.

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마지막 부탁드려요.

my worst?

[영타 → 한타 자동 변환]

샤프 펜슬에 흥미가 있다?
샤프 연필이라는 물건? 아님 수집? interested in ~ing이 자연스러움

머임? 초등학생이신가여?

중3정도이신듯?

My family consists of my father, mother, and old brother. My dream is to be a security programmer. I mainly study through internet lectures. My favorite subject is math while my worst subject is Korean. I am also interested in sharp pencils and my favorite music genre is rock.

[영타 → 한타 자동 변환]